Friday, 10 November 2017

Planning - Pitch of our Initial Ideas

Powerpoint - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EiB1c-7q_zs&feature=youtu.be

Pitch - https://youtu.be/TerRLfYMXcg

The camera cut out the first half of our pitch, hence why the video of it is very short and only contains our setting choices and USP. However, the script that we based our pitch off of will be shown below.


Comments that we recieved after doing our pitch to the class included..

  • Our idea was as a whole well thought out
  • The plot twist was interesting and unique 
However, we were also told that we may need to rethink the idea of only having two characters, as this adding an extra one or two may add more depth to our narrative. Suggestions included having a best friend of the female character, a mother figure for the female protagonist or a wife of the male antagonist which adds another plot twist to our film. 


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